我写的英语作文,写的匆忙,里面有大量低级语法错误,但我查不出,会有好报的!

我写的英语作文,写的匆忙,里面有大量低级语法错误,但我查不出,会有好报的!
I read a book about him when I study in middle-school.Since that,I can’t forget him.He is tall and is not handsome.But he is an American and a giant,come in for people‘s reverence.You are right,he is Abraham Lincoln.
Abraham Lincoln（1809-1865）
In America,Abraham Lincoln was the sixteenth president.He led a great war which was save the commonwealth and ends the slavery.He is the greatest president in the united of states.
But you know all his life was filled with hardship and frustration.He was born in a needy family,in Hardin County,Kentucky,on February 12th,1809.Use his own words to generalize was “a poor simple chronicle”.9 years old the mother die,this is a cruel deed,lucky his stepmother named Nancy was virtuous.15 years old just start to study because of Nancy ’s opinion.She is an important person in his life.24 years old he goes into partnership with person to do business,but did not success,and therefore owed for 15 years; 25 years old his first love Annie die,this made him painful sad and since that he usually appeared black emotion; 32 years old he married with Mary,but after that Lincoln didn't like return home because of his wife's irascible temper.he begin to campaign public position,almost lost every time; but when he was 52 years old he wined the American president,during this time the war between the states break out,it made Lincoln fed up with torture,due to the south at a disadvantage,but the north over and over again loses in the battlefield,when Lincoln was 56 years old the war ends finally,Lincoln also wins a president again,but he was assassinated at the Ford theater enjoy a play.
Lincoln likes to smile,because it could make him have a rest from endless agony and lessen his press.Lincoln likes to speak jokes,too.When he speaks a joke,his face will put light,his eyes will bright,his voice will shiver,and sometimes he like a child will first laugh.But his whole life was spent in endless crucifixion .frustration was the main melody cantus of his life,But Lincoln still stood to come over,keeping till the last a moment!In the American's heart,his prestige even exceeded Washington.