这篇英语作文语法错误帮我改改,

这篇英语作文语法错误帮我改改,
In high school,we were eager to
enter an ideal college..We are now freshmen in university.My
ideal college is a place which has good learning atmosphere and has
colorful activities.College should
be wonderful.
For general students,ideal college can train
specialized persons.College provides perfect conditions.
///////Students can make full of resources to apply for a good job.University is just in order to get a
job in their eyes.They think that college life is too easy.In my
eyes,university is not only looking for
a good job but to also change yourself.
Firstly,we can read a
lot of books in library to increase knowledge.College provides a large number of
books.Secondly,there are many activities to improve quality and make
friends.Thirdly,we can discuss different topics with students and professors.
Finally,wo have the opportunity to experience social life,which can help me more
independent.
In a word ,in my eyes,ideal college should change ourselves
from all aspects,rather than taking
the dilemma to find a job
.