帮忙看下这两篇作文啊!一个满分15,一个满分10~您能给几分?

帮忙看下这两篇作文啊!一个满分15,一个满分10~您能给几分?
题是：should english majors study maths?开头我写 nowadays the society is faced with a problem of whether "english majors should study maths?".which has aroused heated discussion.opposite voices are now rising in the debate.some people firmly claim that english majors should not study maths,whereas others hold that they should study maths,and this is also my point.i would explore a few reasons here.然后中间我写 first and foremost,there is no denying that...第一个论点是能enrich knowledge.然后我写in addition,第二个论点是,useful in our daily life 比如说买东西时,很实用,很practical 最后用last but not the least important,第三个论点是可以锻炼逻辑思维.其中我用了一些简单的句型.比如it is absolutely essential that啊 faced with problems,students...怎么样怎么样啊,然后用only in this way啊可能还有一些~然后用一些常用连接词,比如therefore,cosequently,furthermore 等,结尾写的是：to sum up,taking into account of all these factors ,we may confidently come to the conclusion that...我英语一般,没用什么高级词汇...
这是一便条写作,说你要考试没时间去车站接朋友,你让班里某某去帮忙接,要说一下他大概什么样~要是我说：i am writing to show my apology for not being able to meet you at the railway station.i know that you must be feeling unhahappy about it.the fact is that i have to prepare for my exam.i have asked my classmate emma to meet you at the railway station.she is a tall girl and wears glasses.i sincerely hope you can forgive me.looking forward to meeting you.