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公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.
Most Chinese man are smoke,no matter they are working,chatting or waitting.Now most people have realized the harm of smoke,most of them have gave up smoke,but we could see some people smoking in public places before now wherever we went to.
Smoking in public places ,causing a series of problems.Firstly,that will make the people around you feel bored.Secondly,smoking in public places make the environment worse.In order to not affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoking in public places.
What is the meaning of ban smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effection way to reduce the number of smoking people.Secondly,it can keep others' not be affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment not be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places
公共场所吸烟现象曾随处可见.由此带来的问题.禁止在公共场所吸烟的意义.
Most Chinese man are smoke,no matter they are working,chatting or waitting.Now most people have realized the harm of smoke,most of them have gave up smoke,but we could see some people smoking in public places before now wherever we went to.
Smoking in public places ,causing a series of problems.Firstly,that will make the people around you feel bored.Secondly,smoking in public places make the environment worse.In order to not affect others and pollute the environment ,you had better not to smoking in public places.
What is the meaning of ban smoking in public places?In my view,firstly,this is an effection way to reduce the number of smoking people.Secondly,it can keep others' not be affected.Thirdly,it can protect the environment not be pollute.So I agree to ban smoking in public places
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