改正改进英语作文,主要是语法错误（词组搭配,时态）

改正改进英语作文,主要是语法错误（词组搭配,时态）
我国重新调整了假期制度,增加了中秋、端午等传统节日
这样的调整会产生哪些影响?
我的看法
Nowadays ,the holiday system has been reviced,which has aroused great concern.Many traditional festivals have been added into new system.This revision has a great effect on our life.
First of all,the ideas of western culture into china ,we have gradually forgotten our tradition culture of our country,the reason may be people like the new things.The revision make people aware of the need to protect their nation's culure.Moreover,many people preper to stay at home to have a rest during the short-time holiday.In addition,to see from goverment perspective ,more holiday can stimulate people's consumption,to adjust the country's economic.therefore,the revised holiday system has brought us many effects in our life.
as to me,New holiday system is wonderful!For one thing,making traditional festival would help me to learn about chinese festival and history.Foe another,I can have a good rest .In a word ,most of people will bennefit from the new festival system.
给评评!
新的节日制度中增加了传统节日，这是国家保护传统文化的一项措施，我们会在新的节日制度中去了解传统节日、文化，所以他是wonderful的一个原因。你回答的很认真，很多我都采纳了。