第二句 "there is a lot of time."
第三段 不应用"in other words",换用"besides"."do not nervous"应为 "don't be nervous".
第四段 第一句"college is a place where you start a brand new life." "for the better result" 改为"for a better result" 较好.
"library is a good place for students to study."
"intelligence"拼写错误.
"join in all kinds of activities"
求教 高手改改小弟的英语作文
求教 高手改改小弟的英语作文
College life
You may feel that college life is tiring.there are a lot of time.We do not know what to do .But I think college life is wonderful.
If you have much time,you can play basketball,football and so on.Sports are very interesting.
In other words,you can do anything which you are interested in.Do not nervous.We are friends.
College a new beginning.You can continue to study hard for the better result.Libary is a good places that student study in it.If you want to show your intellegont.You can join in all kinds of kinds of activities.
In a word,college life is wonderful!
College life
You may feel that college life is tiring.there are a lot of time.We do not know what to do .But I think college life is wonderful.
If you have much time,you can play basketball,football and so on.Sports are very interesting.
In other words,you can do anything which you are interested in.Do not nervous.We are friends.
College a new beginning.You can continue to study hard for the better result.Libary is a good places that student study in it.If you want to show your intellegont.You can join in all kinds of kinds of activities.
In a word,college life is wonderful!
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