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Computer games and console video games have grown over time from a relatively subculture into mainstream entertainment. Many children play computer games daily, to the point where playing games can become a concern for parents. Playing computer games can potentially have several negative impacts on kids; however, the effects will vary based on the individual, games played and parental guidance.
In this picture, a boy is seen playing computer games with a gleeful expression on his face. For many kids, playing video games is does not become a serious problem beyond the fact that it can become a distraction that consumes large quantities of time. Many video games take hours, if not days, to complete, and online games have no specified end point, so an unlimited amount of time can be spent playing. Excessive video game use can make kids forget about real world obligations like homework or chores, and may lead to less real world social interaction and personal development. Some computer games involve low levels of mental stimulation that involve little creative thought, similar to watching TV or a movie.
Although computer games can have a negative impact on children, playing computer games doesn't guarantee any negative effects, and in some cases, computer games may be beneficial. Educational computer games and games that develop critical thinking and strategy can be beneficial. Mature children may be able to dissociate violent games from the real world and play games strictly for entertainment. Parents should monitor the types of games their kids play and control the amount of time kids play to reduce any negative impact games might have.