请帮我看一下这英语作文有没有什么语法之类的错误

请帮我看一下这英语作文有没有什么语法之类的错误
题意是针对偏科问题写观点
HOW TO HANDLE YOUR HOMEWORK
we draw a conclusion by the survey of this situation.it shows that most of the students do the homework required strongly by teachers.some of them prefer to doing what they like in most time.while others againest it,they hold their view that it's not a good way to study because when we catch up with one subject,we fail in another one.so it's important to learn how to handle our homework.from my point of view,we should divide them into two parts:the important and the less important.besides,we ought to take up the time regularly.
whatever,the best way is decided to yourself.according to your own situation,make a list of studing.
看我码得这么辛苦 就请看一下吧……