【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法
【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法
One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seeing him.Ther are talking about the thief with a policewoman .Then they are all going to the bus station and catching the thief .The thief is crying.
看看有没有什么语法上的错误和用词不当.明天要交.9点之前.=W= 真的很着急
One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seeing him.Ther are talking about the thief with a policewoman .Then they are all going to the bus station and catching the thief .The thief is crying.
看看有没有什么语法上的错误和用词不当.明天要交.9点之前.=W= 真的很着急
英语人气：863 ℃时间：2020-05-15 22:13:07
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最后那个be going to do不是doing.还有就是,你叙述的是发生过的是,整个时态都不对,用过去时额...我知道应该用过去时。但是老师不允许。。。只需用现在进行时。。。我会过去时的，，，还有没有其他的错误了？能帮忙改正下么？吧one day 改了。。。最后那个be going to do不是doing。怎么改？？？？catch the thief前面不是用and连接的么？时态不应该一致么？还是？还有没有其他的错误了？那么你就要去掉to
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