谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文（非常急,

谁能帮我看看这篇英语作文（非常急,
Hello every one.I am very glad to be here and introduce myself to you.
My name is Huangsong.I am 11 years old this year.I am an outgoing andfriendy girl.In my spare time.I like reading novels.I think reading could enlarge my knowledge.I like to keep pets.I like animals very much.Because animals are not only beautiful ,but also interesting.Animals are natural resources.Animals are our friends.So we must protect them.Today,my topic is about animals'love.
请大家帮我看看这篇演讲稿里有什么词法语法运用错误,然后帮忙改改.我要得很急,今天就要,明天要比赛了.我感激不尽