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Dear friends
I'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.
Sports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.
It not only make me happy,but also I can get a strong body.I do sports every day,you konw ,the more exercis I do,the halthier I will be I feel excited when I do exercise ,because of that,I become stronger than before .In a word.Do sports is a good way to get better grade.
Better body .Better life do more exercises so that we can learn better.
That's all .Thank you.
Dear friends
I'm very glad to have the chance to say something about sports and health.
Sports is important for us.my favorite sport is basketball.
It not only make me happy,but also I can get a strong body.I do sports every day,you konw ,the more exercis I do,the halthier I will be I feel excited when I do exercise ,because of that,I become stronger than before .In a word.Do sports is a good way to get better grade.
Better body .Better life do more exercises so that we can learn better.
That's all .Thank you.
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Sports is 改为are……It not only make……改为makes这个句子不对,前后句主语不一致了,建议：Not only it makes me happy,but also I can get a strong body.正文第四行exercise打错了 healthier打错了 be后面句号...
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