我的孩子今年小学六年级了,面临着小升初的竞争；但老师总评价孩子写作文语言上还算比较流利,用词也比较丰富,可就是作文的深度、高度不够；过去的一年多来,每次孩子写完作文我们一家人（包括爷爷、奶奶）都要给孩子提出一些建议,但孩子进步不大,如何才能

My primary school in the second experiment, it is near my house, it is a great school, with more than 100 teachers. Of these, my favorite is my language teacher - Teacher Li.Li, of medium build, tall...