英语作文 李华 急

dear jane
I was shocked how is going about you? Many years ago you came to my hometown found that it is very poor and the environment is very bad,garbage was everywhere.but now I will happy to tell you that my hometown is not derty any more,it have a big change.
first,the factorymade the air pollut is dispeer,people grow many trees an the mountain,now it is very beautiful. second,penople did not get the strang ill any more,and they lived happely.the more important is people's aware of protect the environment is strengthen,they will more love our hometown than befor.
Wherecome you to comeback to visit my hometown,you will amarze the change of it. I wlii waiting for your coming.
Yours LliHua
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