请以Please be my Pen friend为题写篇英语作文

Dear friend,
Hi,my name is Wang Lin.I'm twelve.I come from Zhejiang,China.I can speak Chinese and a little English .My birthday is October 31st.My favorite sport is basketball ,and I often play basketball with my friends after school.My favorite subject is music,it's very relaxing and I really like my music teacher,Miss Pan.I don't like science,it's too difficult and boring.On weekends I usually go to a movie with my brother.I like action movies best,they are exciting.And my favorite actor is Jackie Chan.
I want a pen pal in America,and I want my new pan pal to help me with my English.Do you want to be my pen pal?Please write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Wang Lin
亲爱的朋友,
嗨,我的名字是王林.12岁.我从中国浙江来.我能讲中文和一点点英语.我的生日是10月31日.My最喜欢的运动是篮球,我经常和朋友们一起去学校玩篮球.我最喜欢的科目是音乐,很放松,很喜欢我的音乐老师,Pan.我不喜欢做的科学,它是太困难,太无聊.在周末我通常和我的兄弟去看电影.我喜欢看动作电影.它是令人兴奋的,我最喜欢的演员是成龙.
我想在美国笔友,我希望我的新的泛朋友帮我学习英语,你想成为我的笔友?请给我写信很快.
最良好的祝愿,
王林