我的初二英语演讲稿 帮忙修改下.thanks～

我的初二英语演讲稿 帮忙修改下.thanks～
My future
In the future ,I want to live in Brithsh Virgin Island.I will live in an arpartment with my friends.We can keep a pet dog .I will work for a company.I'm going to make lots of money when I am young .And then I will treavel all over the world .See different people and different places.Then take lots of photos.If I'm free ,I will go to the beach in Virgin ,surf the Internet ,play CDs,hang out with friends...I can write articuls and draw pictures.The life can be very easy and interesting .I can do what I like.
so ,how can I make my dream come true?Maybe I'm going to study in Hong Kong Univercity .I will mayjor in (经济?).I will study hard and learn lots of things .Then I can go to Virgin to find a job .Then I will work as hard as possible.
I hope I will have a relaxing life in the future.
可能还是有很多不符合语言习惯 还有一些词不达意的 另外还不是特别充实 毕竟要三分钟差不多嘛...