Some people are want to be a doctor 这里不能用are,应改为Some people want to be a doctor
后面1句也是这样改
if a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he should learn math wellyou should learn and read about your dreams 额 我认为about your dreams 最好改为for your dreams 其他的也是这样改
you must have to work hard for your dreams.must和have to是不可以同时用的 这里建议用must
So you will hard for your dreams will come true 额 这里的语法有问题 你的意思是:你的努力会得到回报吗?那可以这样写::Your efforts will pay off in time.
快本忠实粉丝随时为你解答.最后一句更改为So after your efforts, will be realized dreams.可以吗?还是不可以额 木有主语额 可以改为after making efforts ,you will realiaze your dream
帮我查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误的
帮我查一下这篇英语作文有没有错误的
Get Ready For Deams
Many people have many dreams.Some people are want to be a doctor.Some people are want to be a policeman.Some people are want to be an actor or an actress.Do you have good dreams?If you have dreams,you should get ready for dreams.
First,you can do some things about your dreams.For example,a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he can learn math well.Second,you should learn and read about your dreams.It can increase knowledge.Lastly,you must have to work hard for your dreams.
A German philosopher said,"If you would go up high,then use your own two legs."So you will hard for your dreams will come true.
Get Ready For Deams
Many people have many dreams.Some people are want to be a doctor.Some people are want to be a policeman.Some people are want to be an actor or an actress.Do you have good dreams?If you have dreams,you should get ready for dreams.
First,you can do some things about your dreams.For example,a boy want to be a bank clerk one day,he can learn math well.Second,you should learn and read about your dreams.It can increase knowledge.Lastly,you must have to work hard for your dreams.
A German philosopher said,"If you would go up high,then use your own two legs."So you will hard for your dreams will come true.
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