帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有什么错误

帮我看一下这篇英语作文有没有什么错误
Dear
Tom,
Thank you for your email.I have a good friend.Her name is Lingling.She comes from China.She is thirteen years old.She is a middle school student.We are in the same school.Her habits are listening to music and reading books.She is a nice girl.She wants to be yous friend.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Betty.