英语作文 my children's day

Today was children's day ,My parents took me to the park.
今兲 是（is的过去式） 儿童节,我的爸爸妈妈带我去公园玩,
（也可以写成：I went to the park with my parents.我和爸爸妈妈去公园玩.）
(After we got to thr park可省略）we played Roller coaster first.
我们到达公园后,我们 玩 过山车 首先
It was exciting.Then,we played at seesaw .
狠刺激.然后 我们玩 跷跷板
In fact,the park was very beautiful.There was many flowers and
事实上,公园非常漂亮 那里有 很多 花朵 和
butterflies.
蝴蝶
How fun today was!
今兲真是有趣啊!
Today is Children's Day.My father takes me to the zoo.There are many kinds of animals,the
tigers,the pandas,the lions,the elephants,the giraffes and the bears.They are different from
each other ,some are shy,some are beautiful,some are interesting ,some are friendly,some
are so cute.But i think these animals are unhappy,they should live in the forest,because the
life in the zoo are different from that in the forest.