短文改错 共十处 Dear Editor,​i'm a high school student and a English lover.

短文改错 共十处 Dear Editor,​i'm a high school student and a English lover.
i'm a high school student and a English lover.i have been reading your magazine for only a few month,but i have already fallen in love with it.i want to learn english good.then i can use it talk with foreigners.speaking english like a foreigner are my dream.my favorite part of your magazine.i will keep read your magazine,so it's not easy to learn english very well.can you give him more suggestions?
yours,
Li Na