请帮我看一下这段英文有没有语法错误

请帮我看一下这段英文有没有语法错误
Xiamen is a very beautiful city.It is green all year.It is a coastal city with windy most of all the year.In spring,it is warm.The people usually go rowing and fishing.Summer is the best season in Xiamen.It is very hot.Sometimes it is rainy.people like to go to the beach and go swimming.Xiamen is warm most of the time in autumn.The days get shorter and the nights get longer in autumn.The season in winter in Xiamen is windy.So the people only stay at home.
其他人气:714 ℃时间:2020-04-30 08:58:20
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most of all the year .---ALL 去掉.或者说all year round
The season in winter in Xiamen is windy.----season改为climate 气候
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