英语作文（高二）高手的来,小弟头疼啦!

Yesterday, I went to a picnic with my friends and had a great time. We gathered at 5:20 in the morning so that when we arrived at the bottom of the hill, there were not many people. The scenary was be...50多词就够了能不能改回要求额小弟跪求...............Yesterday, I went to a picnic with my friends. We gathered at 5:20 in the morning. Then, after we climbed to the top of the hill, we took pictures, played interesting games and played chess. There were plenty of laughters and I enjoyed myself. Later, at 3 pm., we went down the hill and headed back home. I felt very exhausted when I got home.这样可以了吧？