急!帮忙看看此英语短文有没有错误

急!帮忙看看此英语短文有没有错误
In the reading material, we learn that there are several ways which may help us master English such as speaking without fear, surrounding ourselves with English, listening to native speakers more often, doing exercises and tests, recording out voice.
I could not agree with them more. To extend all above, I still have some personal suggestions.
First, we should find the most suitable way for us to learn English. That is to say, we do not have the best way from others. For example, you may watch the English moive or TV programs to grasp vocabulary or to practice your ears. It's very relaxing which means that you will not focus on the English very well. So we have to be very aimful. We should realize our final target is to master English, not enjoying the amusement. On the contrary, some people may like a serious way to practice. They may listen to the acdemic materials, recite the fresh words directly, read the novels to master grammer and to accumulate the vocabulary. All I want to say is that we should discover the best way by ourselves.
Second, we should keep confident and patient all the time. No pain no gain. If we do not give up, we can touch the success finally.
Those are my personal views and the experiences from my friends.