英语作文标题是Go on a package tour to Beijing

Go on a package tour to Beijing
On the National Day of Chian,Oct 1st this year,dad,mom and I went to Beijing on a package tour arraged by the travel agency.I was so happy because it's the first time that I visit the great capital of our country.We took the bus to arrive at the foot of the Great Wall.There are so many people who had been here.I began to climb the dreamed Great Wall.At first I didnot feel tired,but after I stepped a thousands of steps I felt tired and thirsty.At last,we stood on the toppest point of the Great Wall.The landscape outside and indide it was so beautiful in this autumn!