描写秋天的英文诗

自己原创的,写的不好,希望能帮助点什么.
Autumn is coming
The wind kisses my face,
Slowly and slowly
Like the hand of my mother,
The crops become golden,
Beautiful and beautiful,
Like the honouts from me,
The air is cool,
fresh and fresh ,
Like my girl's skin,
How magic it is!
How exciting it is!
what happened?
Oh~Autumn is coming!
我可以自己翻译下
秋天来了
风亲吻着我的脸硖,
轻轻的,缓缓的,
就象是母亲的手,
庄稼变成了金色,
很美丽,很漂亮,
象征着我收获的荣誉,
空气清清爽爽,
又新鲜,又清新,
象女孩子的皮肤.
多么神奇啊!多么让人高兴啊!
到底是怎么回事呢
啊~原来是秋天来了!
觉得还行,有比喻,有拟人.如果你是在校学生 还是把象女孩子的皮肤那个给去掉吧!