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另外你的答案没错.This's an advertisement and price list of Shawnee mountain lift tickets. The price is different for different type of costumer and different date or time.
你第一句里的it's talk不能写talk 因为太不正式了 而且传单也不会说，另外 就选写talk也要用talking 格式。可以写it's showing 或者就写about. priceof 你写的也太长了就写lift ticket就行，图里给了。
后边句子没啥问题但是可以更简练。