In any Chinese cities,no slum exists,also no so many begger problems.是否太绝对了些呢?而且语法拼写都有错.
参考:in most chinese cities,there are no as many slums and beggar problms as that of india.
In China,food and clothing,minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody,but India still has those problems.好绝对.
参考:food,clothing and mimimum housing are no longer big problems for most chinese,but not for the majority of indians.
Air-conditioner,computer,motorcycle,cell phones...,these items any Chinese can afford to buy绝对了.语法错误.
参考:air-conditioners,computers,motorcycles,cell phones...nearly any of chinese can afford these items ,at least one of them.
Car is no longer a luxury any more,most of people are able to buy it.
参考:cars are no longer luxurious purchases,for more and more chinese are able to buy one or more.
And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.
参考:and cell phones are popular among all ages of chinese ,especially the teenagers.
But for many Indians,those are still dreams.
参考:but for many indians,having those things is still a dream.
I suppose it is very important for children to have a good environment to study and live.确定点儿.
参考:i am sure it is very important for children to have a goog environment to study and live in .
But in fact,India provides children with a dirty environment.语法.
参考:but in fact ,indian children are just provided with a dirty and noisy one.
India’s education is called ‘rote learning’,few schools pay attention to students’ creative development.
参考:what's worse,india's education is called “rote learning”,and many schools don't pay enough atention to students' ceativity development.
A serious problem is that some students can’t go to school,because they are poor,their families aren’t able to do that.语法.to do that ...is do what?
参考:the most serious problem should be that some students even cannot go to school,because their poor family are not able afford the expenses,
In China most students can have a nice environment to learn knowledges.
参考:while in china ,the government is trying hard to make sure that every child
has a perfect environment to learn konwledge and other things.
India is also an oriental country with a long history.Ancient Indians created a splendid ancient civilization.最好删掉.
Indians never be scared about death,they have hopes and confidence for the future.
与主题无关,删.
From my point of view,Indianness is colourful as Chinese culture.
But there are also some differences between them.第三点你是要讲中印文化上的差别,那么你就应该举几个列子如服装,食物,宗教信仰等,而不是这么笼统地带过
参考:china and india are also different in cultures.chinese usually eat meals with chopsticks while indians with hands;...
India is a unique country.India and China are at different levels.And I believe India will develope fast in the future.
主题是将中印的差异,怎么到最后变成对印度的祝愿了?
参考:generally speaking ,as two old countries ,chian and indian are so different in many aspects like social life and plitical institution.
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The difference between China and India
____By watching Slumdog Millionaire
I think China and India are at different levels.There are lots of differences between them.
First,the standard of living in our country is higher than that in India.In any Chinese cities,no slum exists,also no so many begger problems.In China,food and clothing,minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody,but India still has those problems.Air-conditioner,computer,motorcycle,cell phones...,these items any Chinese can afford to buy,Car is no longer a luxury any more,most of people are able to buy it.And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.But for many Indians,those are still dreams.
Second,I want to say something about India’s education.I suppose it is very important for children to have a good environment to study and live.But in fact,India provides children with a dirty environment.India’s education is called ‘rote learning’,few schools pay attention to students’ creative development.A serious problem is that some students can’t go to school,because they are poor,their families aren’t able to do that.In China most students can have a nice environment to learn knowledges.
Third,India is also an oriental country with a long history.Ancient Indians created a splendid ancient civilization.Indians never be scared about death,they have hopes and confidence for the future.From my point of view,Indianness is colourful as Chinese culture.But there are also some differences between them.
India is a unique country.India and China are at different levels.And I believe India will develope fast in the future.
The difference between China and India
____By watching Slumdog Millionaire
I think China and India are at different levels.There are lots of differences between them.
First,the standard of living in our country is higher than that in India.In any Chinese cities,no slum exists,also no so many begger problems.In China,food and clothing,minimum housing are no longer problems for anybody,but India still has those problems.Air-conditioner,computer,motorcycle,cell phones...,these items any Chinese can afford to buy,Car is no longer a luxury any more,most of people are able to buy it.And cell-phone is very popular with all the teenagers.But for many Indians,those are still dreams.
Second,I want to say something about India’s education.I suppose it is very important for children to have a good environment to study and live.But in fact,India provides children with a dirty environment.India’s education is called ‘rote learning’,few schools pay attention to students’ creative development.A serious problem is that some students can’t go to school,because they are poor,their families aren’t able to do that.In China most students can have a nice environment to learn knowledges.
Third,India is also an oriental country with a long history.Ancient Indians created a splendid ancient civilization.Indians never be scared about death,they have hopes and confidence for the future.From my point of view,Indianness is colourful as Chinese culture.But there are also some differences between them.
India is a unique country.India and China are at different levels.And I believe India will develope fast in the future.
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