英文改错 修改语法 拼写错误 换用更好的词 用更好的句型 跟好的方式表达观点

英文改错 修改语法 拼写错误 换用更好的词 用更好的句型 跟好的方式表达观点
The poem “ The furthest distance in the world” shows how importent the love is.It tells people what is the furthest distance in the world and it also makes people to understand what is the most painful thing in the world.In addition,it also encourages readers to face to love bravely.It also tells people love can make short distance.If there are two persons who live in two different places fall in love with each other,they can tell one another,it is not very far away.True love doesn't have to live together,if they are in love,no matter how far they live.In “I like for you to be still”,show the silence love.The real love is not live together,if love eathother,no matter how far they from.Sometimes love is silence,needn’t many words,world can touch each other from far away.Love is silence but the sounds can touch the soul of each other from far away.Love can broke the time and space,love is in people’s heard anytime.