英语作文 我的生日

My birthday
my name is Jom.I'm 13 years old and mybirthday in July 15th.Today was my birthany I very happy.In the afternoon l and my father ,mother go to ate KFC.In the night we ate cake at home.
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My birthday
Yesterday was my birthday.I am 12 years old now.
I was very happy,because my mother took me to the zoo.I saw many animals in the zoo,for example,panda,monkey,elephant and tiger.
She give me 20￥ too.I bought a English book and a beautiful pen.
I love my mother and I like birthday.
生日
昨天是我的生日,我12岁啦.
我非常高兴,因为我妈妈带我去动物园了.在动物园,我看到了许多的动物,比如熊猫,猴子,大象,老虎.
妈妈给了我20块钱,我买了一本英语书和一支漂亮的钢笔.
我爱我的妈妈,也喜欢我的生日.
My birthday
Last birthday,i had a big party.My birthday in on (日期）.I invited my best friends,my classmates and my teachers.We were very happy.We went to a park and had a barbecue.It was delicious.Then we flew kites on a grassy lawn.After that,we went back home.My friends,teachers and my family gave me a lot of presents,such us a toy bear,a notebook and a WII.I was surprised.And we ate a big birthday cake.What a happy day!