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what a surprising news![多么惊人的消息]
we will take part in the Olympic games' the curtain risestomorrow ![我们明天要去参加袄林匹克运动会开幕!]
we are all boggled at the words.[我们对此感到吃惊]
someone are too excited to heard the news.有人听到这个消息很兴奋the manner tells us that we will get together at gate at 2:00 p.m.[管理员告诉我们我们明天下午两点在大门口集合] there will be a bus which could take us there.[有车能把我们带到那里] the bus will take its way for over one hour to arrive at the palaestra.[到达体育场需要一个多小时] we must stand in a line to enter the entrance to avoid waste of time.[我们必须按顺序进场以避免浪费时间] the curtain rises will be hold at 4:00.{开幕式4点开始] I hope we will have a happy time tomorrow.[我希望我们明天有个美好时光]