请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英语作文

请英文好的朋友帮助修改一下英语作文
Useem reflects that collective ethos offers a major role in the development of the company.The bankers learned how important to avoid the red paint to keep the members of the groups to complete the training course during the training course.In relation to the necessity of collectivity,Useem draws a parallel with the business world.The management needed to consider the company first,then the staff,and finally,themselves.He concludes by highlighting the importance of leadership actions should Creating company value,not the pursuit of private value.