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Hello everyone!I am very glad to introduce myself here.My name is xxx.As you can see,I am a girl.I‘m sixteen years old and graduated from No.5 middle school.I like playing badminton though I am not good at it.I also like watching TV and listening to the music.I will work hard in future.Moreover,I hope I can get along well with you guys.Thanks for your listening.That's all!guys什么意思比较口语化的一种表达，同fellas。朋友或伙伴间的相互称呼。