英语翻译

英语翻译
说到教育,大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习.
我写的：When it comes to education,a majority of people regarded it as a lifetime process,
When it comes to education,the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study,
许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康.
我写的：Many experts point out that taking exercises has directly benefit impact on one's healthy.
Many experts point out physical exercise contributes directly to a person's physical fitness.
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