英语翻译

Private businesses have been contributing significantly to the steady and healthy development of the social economy in China,and they have been greasing the wheels of our economy.Currently,although the positive elements are increasing as our economy runs,the fundamental of recovery is still unbalanced and not yet constant,plus the uncertainty of the global financial crisis,the pressure upon exterior demand is still significant,which means that many domestic firms are producing an evident surplus.The development of our economy is yet lacking the motivation and energy to face crisis or conquer difficulties,in the short run expanding domestic demand would be a hard won.Private businesses development is facing tough challenges.
This essay utilised theoretical analysis as basis,assessed the flotation of loan for the private businesses in current situation,including the internal flatation of loan features and external difficulties of private sector.The reason of "hard flotation of loan"is analysed and emphasised in the essay,and ultimate suggestions are made to improve our private sector loaning environment,which includes the overall thinking to the solutions to loaning problems of private firms,and particular methods to create a relaxed market for flotation of loans.
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