写短文以"The place i would most like to visit"为题

the place i would most like to visit
umm,when seeing your question the city first comes upon my head is the charming city :california ,once more ,i've listened to such a sweet enlish song ,to be frank it's deeply touched my heart ,whenever i listened to it,the beautiful scenery will slipped my mind quietly ,i once promised to myself if i can have such a chance to go abroad ,obviously ,the priority choice i should give to california ,from my viewpoint ,it's so cute and fantasy,although i can search more details in the net ,but totally wut i've seen is visionary and a long period away ,true seeing is the most feat ,am i right ofcourse ,but wherever you wanna go ,the first command is having the fund foudation ,cos without money nothing can be afford ,so i'm forced being struggling again then the bright future will being ahead /i suppose,lol !
hope can do you a favor !