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My Virgin Skiing Experience !
I went skiing with my friends on Sunday.It was my very first time to try this super interesting sport.I really enjoyed skiing A LOT,and I think that I have potential!For the entire afternoon,I only fell down twice before our coach actually came and taught us the correct postures.After some basic and advanced practices,I did try to ski down the hill,and it was AWESOME !I think I'll try to go skiing as often as possible.However,wearing all the equipment to walk with is GOD DAMN exhausted!
翻译：我的第一次滑雪!!
我跟朋友去滑雪了星期天的比赛.这是我头一次的时间尝试这只超级有趣的活动.我真的很喜欢滑雪很多,而且我觉得我有潜在的!!!整个下午,我只俯伏三思而后行实际上我们的教练来教我们正确的姿势.经过一些基本的和先进的做法,我曾试滑雪下山,这实在太棒了!!!我想我会试著去滑雪,次数越多越好.然而,戴着所有的设备散步是上帝诅咒累啊!!