请帮我修改这段自我介绍:Hello everyone.My name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I come fromXXX.I'm at grade 11 now.Well,I don't like spor

请帮我修改这段自我介绍:Hello everyone.My name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I come fromXXX.I'm at grade 11 now.Well,I don't like sports very much,so I always atsy at home reading,listening to music or go for a movie in my spare time.I like watching Ameirican Tv series so much,my favorite is 《Rasing Hope》.Generally speaking,I'm a out-going and amicable girl.
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Well不要 Well,不太适合开头 atsy改成stay.go for a movie那句改成 or I will go to the cinema to watch a movie in my spare time.I like watching American TV series so much改成 I like to watch American TV s...Hello, my name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I am fromXXX. I'm a grade11 student. now.Well,I don't like sports very much,so I always atsy at home reading,listening to music or go for a movie in my spare time.I like watching Ameirican Tv series so much,my favorite is 《Rasing Hope》.Generally speaking,I'm a out-going and amicable girl.传错Hello, my name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I am fromXXX. I'm a grade11 student. I don't like sports very much,so I always atsy at home reading,listening to music or go for a movie in my spare time.I like watching Ameirican Tv series so much,my favorite is 《Rasing Hope》.Generally speaking,I'm a out-going and amicable girl.又按到好烦啊Hello, my name is XXX.I'm 17 years old and I am fromXXX. I'm a grade11 student. I don't like sports very much,so I always stay at home reading books,listen to musics or go to the cinema to watch a movie in my spare time.I like to watch American Tv series so much because...(自己加),my favorite bookis 《Rasing Hope》.这个就对了采纳~~花了不少时间啊
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