高手帮我看看这篇英语文章有多少语法错误、结构错误以及用词错误

高手帮我看看这篇英语文章有多少语法错误、结构错误以及用词错误
A glance at the table provided reveals that per person travelled average distance and used mode of travel between 1985 and 2000 in Britain.
One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that to use car is the most distance of all modes between 1985 and 2000 that respectively were 3199 miles (M) and 4806 M.And the car travelled distance how increase is the most prominence.To changed scope were the taxi travelled distanced and there were increase more than 3 times how it ascend sharply from 13 M in 1985 to 42 M in 2000.Per person were travelled by train rise slowly from 289 M in 1985 to 366 M in 2000.And other model were used by English people grow gradual from 450 M to 585 M.
Walking covered the distance to be decline how it decrease steady from 255 M to 237 M.Bicycle can be travelled distance how it sink dramatically from 429 M to 274 M.In all model,local bus travelled distance to be descend that were the prominence that decline exponentially from 429 to 155 M.according this table,we can find that the vehicle cover the distance increase rapidly from 4740 M in 1985 to 6475 in 2000.
All in all,it is very clearly witnessed that in Britain,the people used model of travel what their changed information and average distance were distance by these model of travel.
还有一个问题,比如说A是55,B是11.A比B多5倍,该如何用英语表达
请高手把具体错误帮忙给写出来并且帮忙改一下,不要把自己改过的文章给贴出来.
帮忙认真改的大虾，我在采纳的时候会增加到最高悬赏分的。