自己写的英语作文,辛苦大家帮我看看语法错误

It's a popular situation that the children's schoolbags are getting heavier,which leadsmore and more students to be weary of studying.what's the reason why this situation appers?
As far as I know ,firstly,parents expect their children to beuseful people.secondly,teachers focus on the scores because it is a measurement of performance.Therefore,it is natural for teachers to assign more homework.
In my opinion,it is the most thing that eases the children's academic burden.
本来在WORD上都用红色标出来了,但在这却成了黑色,没办法,只能你自己对着找了.我发现的问题目前就这么多,希望会对你有所帮助.PS:appear是不及物动词后面不能直接加名词,英语的表达不能像汉语,你可以多看一些英语时文,加强语感.