请帮我看一下这句英语对不对

请帮我看一下这句英语对不对
These days I am keeping a bit busy with marketing tour as already told to you that we are expanding our marketing network and I am on tour for appointment of distributors/dealer etc
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1.语法有些许错误,比如,
tell是及物动词,不可加介词,to应去掉
2.有些搭配有问题
3.长句并不一定是最好的,化为简单句并加上写标点 .
4.时态
下面这个只是参考:
As I told you,we planned toexpand our marketing network.
THerefore,I am engaged in marketing tours recently and I am, for the moment, on the way to anappointment with dealers.
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