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一段英文,最好在错误后面加括号,把正确的写在括号里,方便区分!
Nowdays,is becoming more common to find people who would argue that bullfighting is not a honest fest in our country,Spain.Young people,and animals welfare,are probably more critic with some spanish traditions as this one,in fact they are becoming aware of this theme.However,is common to find another people who have the opossite point of view.Bullfighting is considered as an art in Spain.It basically consists in a bullfighter in a bulling,where she/he fights bulls in a special maner,doing specific movements.As the show go through,the bullfighter has to sick some kinds of sacoury,later a sword too,as the animal fall down to the sand.The show ends with an exhibition of the died animal around the bullring.In this essay I'm going to expose the diferent points of view related to bullfighting.