一篇初一英语小作文``求助

My favourite season
Hello,my dear friends!What’s my favourite season?Let me tell you.My favourite season is spring.Spring is a lovely season,I think.There is a garden behind my house.In spring,the trees become green and the flowers give off fragrance(芳香).There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers.The butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing.Sometimes it rains.It usually rains quietly.The rain moistens(滋润) the trees and the flowers.I think they may say,“We’re very thirsty.The rain is very good.It can help us.” What a beautiful scene!Don’t you think so?And what about your favourite season,could you tell me?
My favourite season is summer.That is because I can eat ice cream in summer and ice cream is my favourite food.In the other hand,summer is always with sunshine.The days are always fine then.But sometime it is too hot in summer.Afterall,i like summer the best.
Spring is the first season of the year .In spring ,the weather is very warm,the sky is blue and the sun is very bright.We play football in spring.Spring is green everywhere,the birds spring in the trees.
Look!The bees are busy picking honey ,the butterflies are dancing .How beautiful spring is!Spring is a poem.Spring is a song .I love spring.