以My favourite holiday的短文

My favourite holiday is my birthday.It is our country’s birthday,too.You know,it’s Chinese National Day.
I love that holiday because when I was born,my motherland was celebrated her the forty-ninth birthday.And one year ago,my friend Yang was borned,either.On that day I can say ‘Happy Birthday’to my homeland and each other with my friend.
It’s look hard to understand that.No,it’s easy to explain.So I will tell you as three parts.
First,I was born at that holiday.For my family,the day is the most happy day because my born.I am happy now,because I have my life at that time.Every my birthday,I always can get some presents from my relatives and friends.I am happy when they congratulations to me,even I never have the birthday party.This year’s birthday,I go to my cousin’s home.We play and eat at cousin’s home,we are happy.Then my mother tell me,I can have Justine Henin’s tennis racket!But this present is very expensive,I have to wait to Christmas.
Second,it is Chinese bithday.That day is special at China.It’s means P.R.China was set up many years ago.Every chinese will very excited on that day.I congratulations my homeland too.
At last,it’s my friend Yang’s brithday.When I know his birthday is the same with me.I was excited and fell amazing.I can’t belive!And you need to know,he was my deskmate!He and SenYang Li was my best friend at that time!Every 29th September,he always turn backs to me from his seat… …See each other,congratulations each other… …We look like in the happy zone.We bring the happyness with us to go home.What a happy day!
So my favourite holiday is National Day and never change it!
这篇比较短
My favourite holiday
My favourite holiday is Halloween.
Because I can dress up in a costume and go to a party.
At the party,we can frighten my friend,ask them to give me many sweets.
At the party,I make a lot of friends.
I can frighten my parents,too.
And they can give me presents,too!
Sometimes,I also can get some money.
So,my favourite holiday is Halloween!
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