1、这是叙述过去的事件,而且有准确的时间,因此全文的基本时态确定为一般过去时.用一般现在时不合适.
2、return 是动词,前面已经有了take a bus所以这里连续用动词是错误的,改为back home,这里没必要加our.
3、noodle一般用复数形式,改为noodles.
4、午餐是lunch,dinner改为lunch,和早餐晚餐保持一致.
改后全文:
On Sunday,I usually got up at 7:00.Then I
washed my face and brushed my teeth.After I had breakfast,I went shopping
with my mother.We went to the supermarket by bus.We bought some vegetables
and took a bus back home.We had noodles for lunch.After lunch,I slept
for a little while.Then I did my homework from 14:00 to 17:00.After supper,I
watched TV or read some books.I went to bed at 21:00.It’s my Sunday.
请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文.
请大家帮忙修改一篇英语作文.
On Sunday,I usually get up at 7:00.Then Iwash my face and brush my teeth.After I have breakfast,
I go shopping with my mother.We go to thesupermarket by bus.We by some vegetables and take a bus return our home.Wehave noodle for our dinner.After dinner,I sleep for a little while.Then I domy homework from 14:00 to 17:00.After super,I watch TV or read some books.Igo to bed at 21:00.It’s my Sunday.
请大家指出里面的语法错误。
On Sunday,I usually get up at 7:00.Then Iwash my face and brush my teeth.After I have breakfast,
I go shopping with my mother.We go to thesupermarket by bus.We by some vegetables and take a bus return our home.Wehave noodle for our dinner.After dinner,I sleep for a little while.Then I domy homework from 14:00 to 17:00.After super,I watch TV or read some books.Igo to bed at 21:00.It’s my Sunday.
请大家指出里面的语法错误。
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