没准备考研呢,先看看.我到是比较同意SwinSkyAp说的,不过这种文章用得上很多名言吗?我认为这到不是朴不朴素的问题,我觉得是语言不够地道.比如based on your basic .这就不太好,我估计你想表达的意思是考虑到你的英语水平比较高,把based on 改成“考虑”.
其他的由于自身水平有限说不出来,但可以感觉到和平时看的文章的语言差距.
顺便问问你是2013年的考生吗?是的啊，英语底子差，一到考场崩溃了。
考研英语小作文,大家帮我看看能得几分,真心纠结
考研英语小作文,大家帮我看看能得几分,真心纠结
题目我看成了邀请外国朋友,所以语言态度不怎么尊敬.还有几个语法错误
my dear friend.
i cant wait to recommend you an exciting news that in next week,a XXX contest will be hold in our university.based on your basic-English skill and extraordinary communication,i think you can to be a judge for this contest.
The contest will be hold at Teaching building 5. In that day,many elite students will attend.Thus,you have the responsibility to assure this contest holding in a fair atmosphere.At the end of contest, you will decorate prize to the winner.If you are free,please contact with me at telephone number 12345678at any time.
IM looking forward to your reply.
yours sincerely
liming
题目我看成了邀请外国朋友,所以语言态度不怎么尊敬.还有几个语法错误
my dear friend.
i cant wait to recommend you an exciting news that in next week,a XXX contest will be hold in our university.based on your basic-English skill and extraordinary communication,i think you can to be a judge for this contest.
The contest will be hold at Teaching building 5. In that day,many elite students will attend.Thus,you have the responsibility to assure this contest holding in a fair atmosphere.At the end of contest, you will decorate prize to the winner.If you are free,please contact with me at telephone number 12345678at any time.
IM looking forward to your reply.
yours sincerely
liming
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