自己写了一篇英语演讲稿,请大家帮我找一找语法错误,

自己写了一篇英语演讲稿,请大家帮我找一找语法错误,
Hello,everyone
Today I want to talk something about my hometwon-Qingdao.Qingdao is a very beautiful and mordern city.Qingdao is famous for
her bathing beach,which is known by everyone.In fact,I think Laoshan Mountain is also a good attraction in Qingdao.It may
not be as tall as Mountain Tai.But it's scenery is much more beautiful than most of the moutains in our country.The air on
this mountain is pure and fresh.And besides LaoShan Mountain,I want to talk something about Qingdao's buildings.Because
Qingdao used to be occupied by German,most of Qingdao's buildings are in Germany style.You can see many buildings in
western style,which make Qingdao like a European country.Welcome to my hometown.That's all,thank you