I should learn from ...1.who should you learn from ?2.what should you learn from she/he?. 题目

I should learn from Lei Feng(雷锋)
I should learn from Lei Feng.
Lei Feng was a model soldier,On December 1 8,1940,he was born in a poor peasant family in a little mountain village of Hunan Province.Many people are like him because he is helpful,he often help the other people,he doesn't want anything for helping the others.
So I should learn the spirit of Lei Feng,let the Lei Feng spirit be in my heart year-round.
感觉离题了.- - 这篇貌似写得不怎么样写的很好，但是我要适合六年级的- - 不适合六年级吗..我才比你大一点点啊..你成绩肯定很好，但是我。。。。。。能不能再改一点啊怎么改，改哪里..