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MY Hero
My hero is John Nash.He is now a professor in Princeton University.He is an outstanding mathematician.And he is famous for his great theory — game theory.
He is a genius and he has great potential in math.He studied in Princeton University for his doctor’s degree.Then He won the Nobel Prize in 1994.
But this is not the most important thing.John got a serious disease—schizophrenia.Although he suffered both the mental and physical pain,he didn’t give up his career.He regarded his research as all he has.During this hard period,Nash devoted himself to the math research.Then he succeeded.
What I learned from him is the courage to face life,never stop study and always try to find the mysteries of the world.
And by the way,my dream is to be a mathematician like John Nash.But don’t think is a big dream that I can’t achieve.I always believe that if I can dream it,then I can make it,too.
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