英语作文:An unforgettable experience

An unforgettable experience
in my last summer vacation i went to a fantastic and famous water park in the U.S A.there i was shocked by my exciting experience when way stayed over.that day was a fine day,fine and warm with serenity
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it had more than 20 aquatics.my friends and I went to this water park early,so that we could visit all the items in the park.on a barge we drifted for miles and we really had a good sight view when we go through the vally.after our experiencing all the twenty-odd items,the flume ride was most exciting part,for we dropped into the water right about 25 feet above the water.
this journey gave us a proufound impression and we totally enjoyed this funny day.we loved this water park.