有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~

有哪位大神帮我看看这篇英语的自我介绍呀~
看看语法有没有什么错误之类了,先谢过了
First I want to tell you ,we can learn together.I feel very happy.As you can see ,I was a transfer student.Although I fail in my senior entrance examination.But this did not bring me down,I'm not a loser.
My teacher once said to me:'when you have choices,choose the best.when you have no choices,do your best.'
I have to do the best.
Well,hark back to the subject.
I'm a outgoing girl.I love all the things I like.My favorite color is green.Because it represents new.Also,I love music,especially country music,so I like Taylor Swift very much.
Finally,I want say,I can lose suffer a big.But I will stage a comeback.
Hope we can get alone happy.
Thank you for listening to my self introduction.