Third:bysoon,we came to a KFC together.I didn't know what she likes eat,so just ordered humburgers,wings and some else.I said that must be your favourite,but seemed I was wrong.Then we find a seat and waiting for the meal.Suddenly she asked me seriously:" Are we really not the lover?" I was astonished and a bit surprised.She griped my hand,and with expectation in her eyes waiting for my answer.I didn't what to say and only except asked:"Why did you ask that?"Don't you like the relation between us now?" She asked .I was hesitate.Then I said:"No,acturally I just regard you as my sister." Her tears flew copiously,and said "Yes,you always treat me as a sister.we will never discuss again,and go our own way." I said" I said:"I once have a little feeling to you" ,but she turned her head and no reply.
After a while,she cried told me that she had waited for me since long ago.Everyday she went to school early,causing she wants to see me earlier,(but I always went very late).When classes over,she left after me.She said looking at me makes her happy.Every test,she knew her result is worse than me,but she saw I compared to others result high examination paper,she feel proudly.Last Mid-term exam,she knew she couldn't catch me,but she worked very hard in order not to let me down.After hearing,there are tears in my eyes.I told her firmly:" In fact,the reason I treat you as sister is your lovely and clever,you always make me happy.I know you care for me.Once I was late,you explained to my teacher for me.At time my heart filled with thanks to you,and thought you are the only one who knows me in the world.I always regard you as a treasure in my life,cause it's hard-won.I know you are looking at me everyday,I didn't say cause I don't want your waiting failed.The reason that I treat you as sister is I think that may treasure you better,I hope you can be with me like a sister,I don't want to miss you." After these words,she thought for a while,suddenly said:" can you kiss me now?" I was shocked,and asked her why saying that,cause there were so many people around,that really difficult for me.She didn't answer any more.
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请从语法和语境进行修改,Third:At noon we came to KFC together.I didn't know she likes,I just ordered hamburgers,wings and so on.I said that this was must be you like eating.She seemed very unwilling to submit and said no.Then we together in seat and wait for the meal.Suddenly she askd me seriously:" Were we really not the lover?" I astonishedly the question what asked in her,and I was a bit surprised.She griped my hand,the look fills with the anticipation to wait for my reply.I didn't know that should say anything,only said one:“why you will say this?It is very good that we are like this?” She asked again and again whether we are the lovers,I replied that is not.She said this was really?I hesitated for a while,I also said very firmly:“It isn't,actually I have regarded you the younger sister to treat.” Her tears flew copiously immediately.She said that was good,you regard me the younger sister forever,later we didn't discuss any question again,took each road respectively.I comforted her:"I am a few feeling to you actually"She turned her head to ignore me.A moment later,she cried say to me,actually she has filled with the anticipation to me,each goes to school time she was arrived most early,that was because she hoped to see me earlier(but I am always very late to come to school).When we leave school,she always goes home after I leaves the classroom.Looking at me and left classroom,she filled at heart has satisfied.She said that each test,she knew her result is lower than me,but she saw I compared to others result high examination paper,she feel proudly,thought that my baby is different from others.This time of half final examination,she knew that she couldn't match with me in the exam,but she do it very hard,is for let me be not disappointed.She said these to me,my tear flowed in the corner of the eye nearly,but no strength to flow.I told at my heart for her:"In fact,I always regarded you as a sister to treat,because of your lovely and clever,you always let me feel happy and satisfies each time.I also knew that you are kind to me.Once I was late,but you told with my teacher that I was not intentionally to be late.I was especially grateful to you then,thought only you understand me in the world.I have always treasured the rare fate,because it is hard-won.Each day you come the school very early to wait for my me in the morning,it is known by me also.But I just unwill let your wait fail,so hadn't said.The reason that I regard you the younger sister to treat that is because like this might treasure you well,it also losts you too early because of love.I hope that you could look like the younger sister to company by my side,I were well satisfied."She heard to these words,thought for a moment and said a accidnt's words:"Could you give me a kiss now?"I feel very astonished,asked her why did you said those words make me surprised,there are far too many people here,this is hardly time to do it.Then she said nothing no longer……